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Sheila Nevins | 03/12/2008 8:35 am

Chills in the Hot Sun

Sheila Nevins

Fiction

Her plane was early. She never could adjust anyway to the 8 a.m. flight from New York that arrived for lunch in L.A. It always seemed that she was a time-traveler trying to buy up hours. And now that she arrived even earlier she felt unsettled.

She arrived at the Peninsula, dropped her bag and rushed to the rooftop. She ordered Tonic FluTea just in case, and leaned back in her chair. It had just been raining in New York and she brazenly allowed the sun to bake her face forgetting the skin doctor’s admonition. How could anything that felt so good cause cancer? Warm was good. Cold was cancer

He sat next to her. “Do you mind?” he said. “I’m waiting for someone, my boss to be exact,” she said.

“Can I sit here ‘til then?” he asked.

“I guess,” she answered. “Why not?”

HE: “I noticed you in the lobby.”

SHE: “Noticed what?”

HE: “That you were beautiful.”

SHE: “I’m hardly beautiful and, anyway, I’m old enough to be 
your mother.”

HE: “I like my mother.”

SHE: (laughing) “Oedipus or incest? Take your pick.”

HE: “Either.”

SHE: “I’m waiting for my boss; so don’t be silly.”

HE: “Like what?”

SHE: “Like flirting with me.”

HE: “I’m not flirting with you. I’m telling you what I saw that was beautiful and it was you.”

Chills in the hot sun; so odd; goose bumps. And, so they chatted about this and that. Pizza and Shakespeare. Green tea versus coffee. Ambien and Sonata. Sleep and sleepless. Now and never. He was a writer. She worked in television. He was divorced twice; no kids. She was married; one kid. He was 44.

“Oh my God,” she said. “Change your seat.”

They laughed so loudly they disturbed a famous agent; hateful, but famous. Famous because hateful. And, she smiled at him, this young blind Lothario. “I like your smile,” he said. “Veneers,” she quipped. “They cost a fortune.”

Time passed. Time always passes. Tempus fugit.

Her boss called to change lunch ‘til tomorrow. She could have taken a later plane. It was 4. It was 5. It was 8 in real time — travel. Her nose burned.

“My nose is burning,” she said. “I’ve got to go. I’ve got to go. I’m moist, well-buttered, and baked. So, Romeo,” she said, “I’m on New York time.” “What room are you in?” he asked. “Oh, please little boy.”

“What room big girl?” "Truthfully,” she said, “I don’t know. They give you this plastic key and you’re supposed to remember. I never do. Darling, my room is my business. Frankly, you’d be disappointed anyway. But it’s been flattering to talk to you; engaging; even joyful.”

“Joyful, you sound like Santa Claus.”

“Mrs. Claus,” she said, “she’s my age”.

“I’m in room 552,” he said. “Five-five-two, Madame Beautiful.” “Prince Charming, don’t expect a call; though you are a darling young thing and I’m charmed to the ‘nth’.”

He brushed by her. It appeared to her slow-motion. She’d used that technique in her films – to make a point. She felt the cooling air move. Her body blushed or was it the remaining heat from the fading sun?

At the front desk she handed her rectangular plastic key to the arched plucked eye-browed concierge with a jacket labeled JacquesJasper.

“Ah, Ms. Dawson, how lovely to have you back at the Peninsula.” “Yes, JacquesJasper; lovely to be here. Jacques or is it Jasper?“JacquesJasper, Madame Dawson, I use both.” “JacquesJasper, could you please tell me my room number? With these plastic things I always forget.” “Yes, Ms. Dawson and how lovely you look tonight. Your room number is 553. Five-five-three, a beautiful room recently renovated. Have a lovely evening and enjoy your stay.” “Thank you, Jasper. I mean. Jacque. Sorry. JasperJacques. Silly me, sorry, JacquesJasper.”

And she entered the elevator – alone — and smiled to herself as she circled the “5” button several times round with her perfectly polished index finger.

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32 Reader Comments (so far…) Sign In or Register to comment

Maureen O Brien
What a writer.  Love this!
By Maureen O Brien on 02/14/2008 8:53 pm
Addie Pray
Go back to sleep, Sheila. Let us know how the rest of the dream turned out…Actually I know. 552 has a screenplay he wants to show you…
By Addie Pray on 02/16/2008 2:07 pm
Susan K
LOVE it! I foresee a chance encounter in the corridor….
By Susan K on 03/12/2008 8:12 am
Victoria Lyne
It was sooooo fast paced, I loved the wit between them.
By Victoria Lyne on 03/12/2008 8:15 am
Barb C
Made me smile :) what a fantasy lol although I don’t really want a young man ;) or maybe I do? Oh I hope my husband doesn’t read this.
By Barb C on 03/12/2008 8:35 am
Pam Garlick
This is very good. A quick read, yet fulfilling. Makes you wonder about what she decides.
By Pam Garlick on 03/12/2008 8:45 am
bagtags Lansang
What a fabulous story! Love it!! I wonder what happens next! Yikes… :)
By bagtags Lansang on 03/12/2008 8:57 am
Joanne Mathis
Sheila— Are you sure this is fiction lol. Any hue- As she walked away from JacquesJasper’s desk he immediately picked up the phone and dialed room 552. She entered the elevator – alone — and smiled to herself as she circled the “5” button several times round with her perfectly polished index finger. As the elevator doors opened, directy across from room 552, He was standing there pretending to swipe his electronic key into the door…
By Joanne Mathis on 03/12/2008 9:40 am
Connie B
Smiling to herself, she relishes this feeling of sexy and beautiful. Remembering the afternoon, she cocks her head and reflects for a moment – delicious, tantalizing, tempting. 553, 552 – too much coincidence, she actually chuckles out loud as her elevator stops on her floor. There is a spring in her step as she finds her room and opens the door. The light on her phone flashes with a message and her heart skips a beat – how could he know ???? Her mind races. She calls to pick up the message and hears ……..
By Connie B on 03/12/2008 12:02 pm
Tricia Scott
Just like the warm sun—drink it up and enjoy it, whilst it lasts—-the chatting that is.
By Tricia Scott on 03/12/2008 12:49 pm
Jeni Conley
made me smile but i want to know what is next…. i’m too codependent to stop it there!
By Jeni Conley on 03/12/2008 12:56 pm
Joanne Mathis
As the elevator doors opened, directy across from room 552, He was standing there pretending to swipe his electronic key into the door, the script he had tucked under his arm pit droped onto his Bruni Magli shoes. She stiffened as she saw this….
By Joanne Mathis on 03/12/2008 1:20 pm
Kate Cassidy
She pressed the button…broke her nail and went to her room and ordered room service.
By Kate Cassidy on 03/12/2008 1:32 pm
Amanda Blue
It is so fulfilling to have a scintillating exchange with someone of the opposite sex , I still remember a conversation with a cab driver in Chicago who drove me from the airport to my daughters upon my return from San Diego in 1995. There was nothing of a sexual nature between us that day but I felt him change and open up to me as we drove through the city and I think I fell a little in love with him that day. It is still a pleasant memory after all these years, more, I am sure, than heat between the sheets would have been. There is something about anticipation that is better than the real thing most of the time, at least in my experience.
By Amanda Blue on 03/12/2008 4:22 pm
Rhonda Mony
What peninsula was that on? I think I’ll book my next vacation there.
By Rhonda Mony on 03/12/2008 5:26 pm