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Sheila Nevins | 03/12/2008 8:35 am

Chills in the Hot Sun

Sheila Nevins

Fiction

Her plane was early. She never could adjust anyway to the 8 a.m. flight from New York that arrived for lunch in L.A. It always seemed that she was a time-traveler trying to buy up hours. And now that she arrived even earlier she felt unsettled.

She arrived at the Peninsula, dropped her bag and rushed to the rooftop. She ordered Tonic FluTea just in case, and leaned back in her chair. It had just been raining in New York and she brazenly allowed the sun to bake her face forgetting the skin doctor’s admonition. How could anything that felt so good cause cancer? Warm was good. Cold was cancer

He sat next to her. “Do you mind?” he said. “I’m waiting for someone, my boss to be exact,” she said.

“Can I sit here ‘til then?” he asked.

“I guess,” she answered. “Why not?”

HE: “I noticed you in the lobby.”

SHE: “Noticed what?”

HE: “That you were beautiful.”

SHE: “I’m hardly beautiful and, anyway, I’m old enough to be 
your mother.”

HE: “I like my mother.”

SHE: (laughing) “Oedipus or incest? Take your pick.”

HE: “Either.”

SHE: “I’m waiting for my boss; so don’t be silly.”

HE: “Like what?”

SHE: “Like flirting with me.”

HE: “I’m not flirting with you. I’m telling you what I saw that was beautiful and it was you.”

Chills in the hot sun; so odd; goose bumps. And, so they chatted about this and that. Pizza and Shakespeare. Green tea versus coffee. Ambien and Sonata. Sleep and sleepless. Now and never. He was a writer. She worked in television. He was divorced twice; no kids. She was married; one kid. He was 44.

“Oh my God,” she said. “Change your seat.”

They laughed so loudly they disturbed a famous agent; hateful, but famous. Famous because hateful. And, she smiled at him, this young blind Lothario. “I like your smile,” he said. “Veneers,” she quipped. “They cost a fortune.”

Time passed. Time always passes. Tempus fugit.

Her boss called to change lunch ‘til tomorrow. She could have taken a later plane. It was 4. It was 5. It was 8 in real time — travel. Her nose burned.

“My nose is burning,” she said. “I’ve got to go. I’ve got to go. I’m moist, well-buttered, and baked. So, Romeo,” she said, “I’m on New York time.” “What room are you in?” he asked. “Oh, please little boy.”

“What room big girl?” "Truthfully,” she said, “I don’t know. They give you this plastic key and you’re supposed to remember. I never do. Darling, my room is my business. Frankly, you’d be disappointed anyway. But it’s been flattering to talk to you; engaging; even joyful.”

“Joyful, you sound like Santa Claus.”

“Mrs. Claus,” she said, “she’s my age”.

“I’m in room 552,” he said. “Five-five-two, Madame Beautiful.” “Prince Charming, don’t expect a call; though you are a darling young thing and I’m charmed to the ‘nth’.”

He brushed by her. It appeared to her slow-motion. She’d used that technique in her films – to make a point. She felt the cooling air move. Her body blushed or was it the remaining heat from the fading sun?

At the front desk she handed her rectangular plastic key to the arched plucked eye-browed concierge with a jacket labeled JacquesJasper.

“Ah, Ms. Dawson, how lovely to have you back at the Peninsula.” “Yes, JacquesJasper; lovely to be here. Jacques or is it Jasper?“JacquesJasper, Madame Dawson, I use both.” “JacquesJasper, could you please tell me my room number? With these plastic things I always forget.” “Yes, Ms. Dawson and how lovely you look tonight. Your room number is 553. Five-five-three, a beautiful room recently renovated. Have a lovely evening and enjoy your stay.” “Thank you, Jasper. I mean. Jacque. Sorry. JasperJacques. Silly me, sorry, JacquesJasper.”

And she entered the elevator – alone — and smiled to herself as she circled the “5” button several times round with her perfectly polished index finger.

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Alice Allmon
Holly molly! I am so board this day’s that honestly “I could use something like that” I had a relationship like that with a family law attorney. The sad thing is he couldn’t make up his mind about us. Oh well!
By Alice Allmon on 03/12/2008 6:31 pm
auggie rudolph
**SIGH** :) makes me want to surprise my hubby in chicago!!! :)
By auggie rudolph on 03/13/2008 9:25 am
Tammy Moore
OK where is chapter two. Don’t leave us hanging. I could read more…………..
By Tammy Moore on 03/13/2008 7:14 pm
gilbert stafford
Ladies, I hope you will pardon my intrusion ( by my sex I mean). Dahling, how utterly Fannie Hurst in it’s little “what a lovely incident” factor. The wise well worn woman so amused, yet intrigue by the affable young stud. Where’s the rest of it? Knowing you, I knew there wouldn’t be a moment when I’d have to look away. Yes brevity is the soul wit, but come on…
By gilbert stafford on 03/14/2008 4:39 pm
Sharon Belko
Yes. Barb you do - if you ever get the chance. Mine is 20 yrs younger and a wonderful delight - although he sometimes has a hard time keeping up with me!
By Sharon Belko on 03/14/2008 9:51 pm
Tammy Moore
My momas third husband was 20 years younger, her fourth is 13 years younger. She likes the young ones and they like her. I’d Love to read more of Ms. Dawsons adventure
By Tammy Moore on 03/14/2008 10:34 pm
Karen Batchelor
Even in fiction it’s hard for women to take a great compliment. What is it about us sometimes!? Well, sounds like there could be an opportunity for more dialog with Room #552 if “she” forgets that age is but a number.
By Karen Batchelor on 03/15/2008 4:25 pm
Lynda Livesey
Flirting is so energizing! No matter your age, one should never lose the desire or the skill.
By Lynda Livesey on 03/15/2008 6:16 pm
France 81
It reminds me of a 28 year old Greek God pursuing me with a vengence in West Hollywood and believe me, I’m the far side of 50. I beseeched him to get therapy but it was flattering as hell…and no, he was not gay.
By France 81 on 03/15/2008 10:23 pm
Dawn Miller
aaahhhhhh!!! i want to hear the rest!!!
By Dawn Miller on 03/16/2008 5:15 pm
Veronica  S
Ohmygosh……I am sweating….or maybe it is chills? For such a short story, the intense reaction is quite unusual. The writing style is sooooo good! This should made into a film. By the way, if it is autobiographical, I can only say that I can understand (from your photo) why a 44 year old would want you! It must happen all the time. Arouses just a bit of jealousy.
By Veronica S on 03/16/2008 6:31 pm
Suzanne M
Beautiful! Except for the “you’d be disappointed” line.
By Suzanne M on 03/17/2008 1:11 am
Rachel
Oh my Gosh! Please tell me she went inside her own room, freshened up, had a glass of wine from the mini bar, applied a bit of lipstick and knocked on his door!
By Rachel on 03/20/2008 3:16 pm
Tammy Moore
Just let me know when this story gets published. I’ll be first in line.
By Tammy Moore on 03/21/2008 4:23 pm
Buh-Bye Hillary Hillary Buh-Bye
Two years later….. He opened the door onto the columned foyer that led into the smart 19th century townhouse. High ceilings, sophisticated chintz, vases of Casablanca lilies. A serene Architectural Digest world. Nothing bad could ever happen here. She held her uneaten chocolate soufflé desert out in front of her. “You brought cake?” “Chocolate soufflé.” “Peace offering?” “Civility offering. May I come in?” “Please,” he said and opened the door wide. She handed him the plate and passed through into the salon. Papers and technology were spread on the sofa. He was dressed for a night in. Gray cashmere sweater. Gray slacks. Soft loafers. “Can I offer you something to drink?” “Can I watch you make it?” “Can’t stand to be away from me?” “Just want to make sure it’s not doctored.” “With?” “Who knows? A pinch of thallium would do the trick.” “It’s not like the woman I know to be paranoid.” “It’s not like you to be trustworthy, Mr. Man.” “You make the drinks, then. I’ll have scotch. There’s the bar. I’ll go eat my cake.” She poured two scotches. His neat, her’s two fingers with ice. They sat opposite each other, in matching doublewide brocade armchairs covered with fabric the color of a caution sign. The massive dark ocean of a coffee table was between them. He leaned forward on the edge of his seat, eating the soufflé from the plate on the table. “What’s this about?” He took a long drink of scotch while examining her. “You look quite beautiful, by the way.” “I don’t know how to say this to ensure it doesn’t sound like a threat.” He let the silver fork clatter onto the classic dinnerware. He turned his head slightly to one side, the way a cobra does before it strikes. “You’re here to threaten me” “I trusted you that I’d get a good return when I’ve never gotten any of it back. I’m OK with that. Making my new life is more important than a fight. I understand that I didn’t marry the romantic who pursued me but a pit-bull in a Saville Row suit.” He smirked. “Let’s cut to the chase.” He picked up his glass of scotch and drank half in one gulp. “All I want is to be left alone. But you’ve spied on me, you’ve humiliated me with pictures planted in the newspapers, and have gotten Veschi to sue me for $40 million plus punitive damages.” He glanced at his watch and shrugged. “So I’m no Boy Scout.” “What’s the point?” He sat forward like a shot and jabbed his finger at her. “The point is that you are still my wife. I have enough pressures at the moment without all this extra shit from you.” “That’s how you characterize my trying to reconstruct my life?” “Yeah. That’s what women really want, isn’t it? To band together, castrate men and rule the world.” “We plan to squeeze it in between Pilates and pedicures.” “I’m damned tired. Say what it is you came to say.” “I want you to cease and desist. I want you to leave me utterly alone and hope that you will find some woman who is more simpatico.” “And what if I say that isn’t going to happen?” “Then I’d say my percentage stake in your company is now strong enough to demand a work-out and effectively force you out.” He turned slightly to look at her with one eye. It looked huge, like a whale’s eye. And afraid, like all the CEO’s that enter a courtroom cocky and come out condemned. She knew he could finally see what he had done. His life was crashing down. “All I want is for it to be totally over. So I can start a new life. I want you to start a new life too.” He closed the eye. She inhaled then reached for her clutch on the table and removed cut sheets of thumbnail photos. She held these for a moment. He half-stood up and leaned over the table, his hand outstretched. “Well?” She passed him the photos of warehouses brimming with books that were never produced to be read, and never meant to go anywhere, along with associated financial records and other trails of documents. “A shell company for massive scale money laundering and fraud,” she said. “And evidence about your involvement with Veschi.” He studied the contact sheets, then tapped them in a sheaf on the table. He snarled and pounced like a beast going in for the kill. ***But the real mystery here is I can’t get the
By Buh-Bye Hillary Hillary Buh-Bye on 03/23/2008 5:22 pm