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Sheila Nevins | 11/13/2008 12:00 am

Voodoo Redux

Did you ever want a voodoo doll to stick pins in for revenge on an enemy? 
This subject did.

Voodoo Redux
An essay in verse


She was easily hurt
And wounded
But a novelty item
Her voodoo doll (with pins) kept her phony sweet demeanor
Intact in daylight.

At night with no one near
She would stick pins in various organs
Of those she deemed enemies.
The kidneys of Douglas
The liver of Adriana
The ear of Newton —
And then
She would sleep peacefully.

Slightly paranoid and never known as particularly kind,
Her evenings were busily spent alone
In revenge.
And only once did she prick her own finger
Bringing blood
Which she sucked up deliciously.
Vampire like.
Loving the taste — she would
Cause pain to various adversaries
That stood in her way unknowingly
As she was on her way to nowhere special.



One day
Returning to her bedroom chamber
Suddenly
An excruciating double-over pain
Took her.
Grasping her side
Gasping for breath
She called for help to
Her one remaining friend, Samantha,
Whom she had never stuck …
Yet.

Samantha rushed her
To Emergency
A room full of those more folded over than she
Taken last,
Finally her turn.

A million pricks later
And a million moments of look-see
The medical staff
Declared this afflicted patient
Free of any discernable illness.
Straightening her up
They presented her with a prescription that said,
Mysterious.
Released.
Agitated.
No remedy.


That night
Dozing
Relieved finally from excruciating pain
The patient looked at her voodoo doll
And noticed it trying to speak.
In Vodoun-ish,
Zedgfadghel, Srghalla, Feaalrakh
Then suddenly speaking in English with echo
It announced a premonition —
From the bottom of its ragdom,
"You are knownnnnnn!"
It then slumped into material silence,
Head bent.



The human perpetrator knew then,
That somewhere an enemy
(And there were many)
Had discovered her secret
And had pinned her to her doom.

In revenge
A tit for tat
A return serve
A slam-dunk
So in a rage — out of the park
She blamed her doll
Tossing it to the floor
Pins everywhere
Stuffing spread
Accusing the dead rag of talking to friends and giving up secrets
While realizing in her rage
That this voodoo behavior
Had to be stopped
Or
Else.

Read more about: Poetry, Revenge, Voodoo

23 Reader Comments (so far…) Sign In or Register to comment

Ms. Dee
Makes me feel like maybe I should change my moniker…again. Ha! Well done, Ms. Nevins.
By Ms. Dee on 11/13/2008 4:38 am
Jennifer Dooley
Ms Dee, Are your avatars a pair? This one seems to have a different coloring, and what a cute shot. Do you brush them every day? Beautiful coats. i stop to tell you I had no idea what a monmiker was , i guessed right, but you made me use the dictionary. I like it when that happens! I am never here on wOw that i do not learn something, that is why I think we wowers are here! Enjoy and Congrads for your comment of the week!!!
By Jennifer Dooley on 11/14/2008 7:07 pm
Ms. Dee
Jennifer Dooley! I wish! Wouldn’t it be fun to have a pair of Henry’s! But no. He’s just being a Buddha in this shot. I try to brush part of him every day, and occasionally we go see a groomer. He’s very ticklish so he won’t let me do his whole coat in one setting, and he thinks he deservs a treat if he sits still for the brush for five minutes. But now you have me all confused again about which is an avatar and which is a monaker. Monaker isn’t even in my dictionary. But avatar is, so, yes. I’m confused. And I can’t always type very well. My monaker is Ms. Dee… Did I spell it wrong…monaker, I mean. Thanks for all your posts.
By Ms. Dee on 11/14/2008 7:48 pm
Serena .
Did you ever want a voodoo doll to stick pins in for revenge on an enemy?” A couple of exes come immediately to mind …
By Serena . on 11/13/2008 7:21 am
phyllis Doyle Pepe
Yippers! As Frank would say (and by the way anyone know how Frank is?). Can’t say I’ve ever wanted revenge in quite that delicious way, but did wish many would eventually get their just desserts for dirty deeds like these financial gurus that got us into this mess or the big war planners that got us into this other mess. Pricks get their pricks one way or another.
By phyllis Doyle Pepe on 11/13/2008 8:11 am
mary lou s
phyllis, you picked the right people to revenge ourselves upon. now if there were a voodoo doll with a jail cell stomach…
By mary lou s on 11/13/2008 11:24 pm
joan larsen
Hi Phyllis . . . I know just where Frank is . . . and I just saw a photo of a very very happy man. Finally. But I have a pledge of silence that I must keep. But know he WILL be back when he isn’t quite so busy — and more than a little distracted :-) Be happy for him.!!!
By joan larsen on 11/15/2008 9:03 pm
Diana T
Phyllis, I think Frank is finding himself involved in a romance. I hope he doesn’t forget all of us here.
By Diana T on 11/16/2008 3:49 pm
JJ GB
Don’t believe in voo doo dolls, but it would be nice to see some of the people who have willfully harmed others get their just desserts during my lifetime.
By JJ GB on 11/13/2008 8:56 am
Chrome Toe
I’m not a grudge holder.
By Chrome Toe on 11/13/2008 9:16 am
Mama Lwa
Alafia, dear sisters. It is the ancient and sacred African religion of Vodou that you insult with the pejorative image of “voodoo” dolls. Slaves who helped build your country were beaten to death for the practice of the African Faith, ancient drums were destroyed, and we practiced our faith beliefs surreptitiously until we were freed, and could do so openly without fear. It was then that Hollywood promoted images of zombies and voodoo dolls which again resulted in unwarranted fear and prejudice against our faith. We accept and welcome the your beliefs. Please respond in kind with ours by learning the truth of the African Faith and respecting its ancient roots. Modupe, sisters.
By Mama Lwa on 11/13/2008 10:02 am
phyllis Doyle Pepe
Dear Mama: I don’t think anyone here has criticized your Vodou religion. Why don’t you enlighten us about this African Faith and its ancient roots. I think many of us would appreciate that. As far as you accepting and welcoming our beliefs, you’d have to clarify that statement because in this country they are all over the place. Looking forward to your response.
By phyllis Doyle Pepe on 11/13/2008 1:13 pm
Kryssi K
Wow, I had no idea about those roots of Vodou - thank you for the education; I’m fascinated!
By Kryssi K on 11/14/2008 4:36 am
Grande Camper
Yes, the Hollywood “voodoo” doll image I do not like. The one that use to scare are used by the evil person(s) to do mean things. But if my memory serves me right I believe voodoo doll were once used in healing ceremonies too.
By Grande Camper on 11/13/2008 10:15 am
thatsoutherngirl k
Nah…I don’t hold grudges. I’m probably the most forgiving person I know but saying that…I do not allow anyone to step on me.
By thatsoutherngirl k on 11/13/2008 1:00 pm